Hey Bradlee. I just wanted to thank you for your comments on my portfolio story. The comment about making the sentences flow better and watching for the word “and” was very helpful. I hope I fixed this in my revise and that I can watch for it in future stories that I write. Thank you again for the insightful comments and I’m glad you enjoyed the story, means I’m doing at least one thing right!
Hey Bradlee. I just wanted to thank you for your comments on my portfolio story. The comment about making the sentences flow better and watching for the word “and” was very helpful. I hope I fixed this in my revise and that I can watch for it in future stories that I write. Thank you again for the insightful comments and I’m glad you enjoyed the story, means I’m doing at least one thing right!
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